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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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The art here is good, it's colorful and fun. The dialog is superb, I have no problem reading this in the Characters on screen voices, and the banter between the CMC is just awesome. Each pony's dialog fits there character perfectly, and they behave just as they would in the show. And the characters expressions are funny and animated, Rarity and Sweetiebell's expressions are particularly well done.
However, in comparison, the first three panels seem a bit bland compared to the rest of the comic. It is by no means bad, but if one wanted to improve upon there work, I would start by adding a bit more detail to the first three panels, or consider adding a tad more color to the background. I would also recommend softening the shadow cast on Rarity a bit, since she is so much brighter then the other characters in the booth. However it is worth mentioning that this is a bit nit picky, and that the issues don't take away from the comic what so ever.
In any case this comic is charming. It set out to narrate the hijinks of the Cutie Mark Crusaders and that's exactly what it did. Keep up the good work AniRichie. I hope you find my critic helpful.
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