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CMC Confessional 1: anirichie-art.deviantart.com/a…

Want more traumatized/innocent CMC's? Well here ya go.
Poor Sweetie Belle, learning life lessons the hard way! :XD:

Enjoy.

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Media: Flash CS4, Manga Studio Debut, Tablet, Photoshop CS4


Character copyrights Hasbro and Lauren Faust :iconfyre-flye:


- Anirichie 2013
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:iconderpyslegion:
This is a charming little comment. I always enjoy seeing the Cutie Mark Crusaders, up to no good. Even if its in the most innocent manner possible.

The art here is good, it's colorful and fun. The dialog is superb, I have no problem reading this in the Characters on screen voices, and the banter between the CMC is just awesome. Each pony's dialog fits there character perfectly, and they behave just as they would in the show. And the characters expressions are funny and animated, Rarity and Sweetiebell's expressions are particularly well done.

However, in comparison, the first three panels seem a bit bland compared to the rest of the comic. It is by no means bad, but if one wanted to improve upon there work, I would start by adding a bit more detail to the first three panels, or consider adding a tad more color to the background. I would also recommend softening the shadow cast on Rarity a bit, since she is so much brighter then the other characters in the booth. However it is worth mentioning that this is a bit nit picky, and that the issues don't take away from the comic what so ever.

In any case this comic is charming. It set out to narrate the hijinks of the Cutie Mark Crusaders and that's exactly what it did. Keep up the good work AniRichie. I hope you find my critic helpful.
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:iconflutterdawn:
Flutterdawn Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  New member
Haha! Halarious!
Lol!! 😂
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:iconnorthgalus2002:
Northgalus2002 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
Oh my, that last panel with Sweetie Belle!  It's true what they say about a marshmallow scorned!
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:iconxxdarkchaosmlg2xx:
XxdarkChaosMLG2xX Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student Filmographer
:iconsilverlayfacehoofplz: Should i enter the booth now? :icondatassplz:
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:iconihategeorgethetree:
ihategeorgethetree Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DDDOOOCCCTTTTOOOOORRRR
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:iconstarfire-zorua:
starfire-zorua Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I think I've entered the wrong booth.
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:iconpinkiepie-partypony:
PinkiePie-PartyPony Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The Birds And The Bees? xD
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:iconwolves-are-coool:
Wolves-are-coool Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Pftftftftf... that last panel.
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:iconstormalchemist15:
StormAlchemist15 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You better have a place to sleep tonight Rarity,or else Sweeeeeetie Bellllllllle willcome for you in your sleep
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:iconr4inbowd4shh:
r4inbowd4shh Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
LOL the last panel :ono: 
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:iconchocolate-cupcake12:
chocolate-cupcake12 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014
dat face XD
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:iconr4inbowd4shh:
r4inbowd4shh Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
LOL XDD
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:iconzafiri--moon:
ZAFIRI--moon Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013
Deverias hacer la cara de sweetie belle un meme XD

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:iconmiyakiyoshi:
MiyakiYoshi Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
What is with Sweetie acting like other ponys? Lol. 
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:iconbigblackbrony:
BigBlackBrony Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dat face in the last panel lmao!
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:iconaskmerisstheskeletal:
lol at her face at the last panel
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:icongogeta17:
gogeta17 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
ice cube and sweetie belle (at the same time): i want reveeeeeeeenge!
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:iconbulbaderp:
Bulbaderp Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Fork You!!!!!! LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
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:iconthatgeekwitheclipons:
ThatGeekWiTheClipOns Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
That last panel is a look that says "You better sleep with one eye open from now on, BITCH!" ^_^
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:iconmagic-z-dog:
Magic-Z-Dog Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013
I think I entered the wrong booth...
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:iconhotdawg12:
hotdawg12 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That last panel got me!
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:iconcs-epicness:
CS-epicness Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I dont get twillight why would she get embarredsed?
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:iconcatdog1090:
Catdog1090 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
Birds and the bees is an expression- Read the top and youll understand - en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_bird...
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:iconaskmerisstheskeletal:
AskMerisstheSkeletal Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
heh heh heh heh heh...
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:icontifzhe299:
tifzhe299 Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconflutterrageplz::iconsays3plz: MMMMMMMMOOOOOOOAAAAAAARRRR!!!!!!
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:iconlolapink03:
LolaPink03 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Funny!
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:iconandaverde:
andaverde Featured By Owner May 1, 2013
please let there be a part 3 XD
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:iconskrillexxfh:
SkrillexxFH Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The 9th and 10th.. Oh god. XD
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:iconalfamaxis:
Alfamaxis Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
THE LAST PANEL!! OHSHIT AHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHHAH!!!!XD
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:iconchocoqueen112:
chocoqueen112 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013   General Artist
Sweetie Belle would totally respond that way. XD
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:iconbigdon887:
bigdon887 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
The only enviable part of Rarity's situation is that she's in equestria. Every thing else kinda sucks, but thats just my opinion.
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:iconiwuvwoona:
IwuvWoona Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You might not want to try that again, Sweetie.
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:iconzappo210:
zappo210 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
you should make separate comics of these.
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:icontopnotchpony:
topnotchpony Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
;=; that face
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:iconsuperchaoskg:
SuperChaosKG Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
Dat last Panel...
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:iconoliver--fey:
Oliver--Fey Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
daww
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:iconmalphlink:
MalphLink Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
bend the fork
bend the fork
:la:
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:iconxstone1:
xstone1 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
Doctor!
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:icondiscordantprincess:
DiscordantPrincess Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
Umm, Sweetie? Maybe you should give me the fork before you confront Rarity about this, 'K?
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:icongirtoy22:
Girtoy22 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
LOL
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:iconneoslightning:
Neoslightning Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Sweetie bells face at the end gets me every time
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:icondiamonion:
Diamonion Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
forgive me ponies for i have sinned...
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:iconexxpert:
exxpert Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
Love Twilight's face. So cute ^^
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:iconoppositeofanartist:
OppositeOfAnArtist Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
Isn't that Pinkie's line?
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:iconcinderel345:
cinderel345 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
Sweetie Belle is a filly version of Pinkie Pie.
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:iconoppositeofanartist:
OppositeOfAnArtist Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
Impossibruh!
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:iconcinderel345:
cinderel345 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
nope she is
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:iconaugui:
Augui Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
Dat Sweetie Belle raegfaec
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:iconcentaur71:
Centaur71 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
Is it me? or is this comic geting...dark?
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:iconbleyestudios:
BleyeStudios Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
>:_I
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:icontemplar127:
templar127 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
DAT SWEETIE BELLE FACE!
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